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Azi - Closer To My Dreams

| Monday, March 15, 2010
This is a joint by my man Azi called Closer to My Dreams. Check it out, he is a young cat at the ripe age of 16, he is looking for some constructive feed back to improve his craft. For all my xbox live gamers hit him up Gamertag: xKing Azix


Closer to my dreams

11 comments:

Costa said...

All he really needs is time to get comfortable with his voice. Everything else was straight, its good to hear the youth talking about more than some type of dance or material things. A better mic would help also but that will come with time.

K' said...

Cosign Costa, check your breathing at times you sound winded. Its not bad. Keep striving.

Supa said...

I think the joint is just fine, but I would like to hear a original track to give full feedback. K' and Costa covered it.

Supastarrr said...

I agree w|Costa. He's good though. Keep it up, Azi.

Aaron said...

I thought he was good. Judging by his track selection, the young man likes real music. Azi does need a little more time to get comfortable with his voice. If rhyming is what he wants to do, he needs to spend the majority of his time doing nothing but that. Only practice can iron out those kinks.

A good condenser mic would help, but I've seen seasoned MC's rock the cheapest dynamic mics and still shine. Practice and a good mix are the keys to a good track. Study basic engineering, or find a good engineer, whichever your pockets can afford. Record every chance you get so that you can listen to yourself. Keep grinding, I like the message and see the potential for greatness.

Tiffluv said...

I can't really comment on the sound quality because I dont know but so much about that. I listened to the track and then read the comments and then played the track again and the comments above make more sense to me know. Just remember at the end of the day when you make music from the soul it will always be accepted and respected. You'll get the quality and you "own" sound with time. One

KidNice said...

overall he sounds dope and I have to give him some props for rocking over that beat...but he need to work on his flow, timing and his deliverance. Other than that, I was feelin' it.

Eyesofphases said...

I would like to take the time to thank everyone for checking out this young mans track and for the feedback. Azi has massive amounts of potential and will build on his craft.

DGuy said...

Good Lyrics in the song but yeah needs to work on how he sounds and better equipment.

Angie said...

Stay on your grind young man

Mykier said...

I would like to thank all of you for your comments and for taking time to listen to the youngin do his thing.. preciate everyone of yall and look for more from me soon..